Category Archives: Writing

New Site Content: Character Biographies

As part of the new site content, I’m introducing character biographies to the website.  I’ll have background details and general descriptions of central (and some side) characters for each of the series I write in.  Up first (because it’s the smallest cast of characters) is the the Star Portal Universe and the cast of Fenris Unchained.

I tried to strike a balance of giving enough background to develop the character without including any real spoilers.  As one might imagine, on Fenris Unchained, this was more difficult than I’d like, but I think I did alright.

Ideally I’ll add pictures of the characters at some point, but for now, I’m taking the time to go through and do the same to all my other universes.  The good news is most of this is already done in the form of notes I keep for myself, I’ve just got to scrub those and make sure I don’t give away any spoilers.

Up next I’m working on characters from the Eoriel Saga and then from the Shadow Space Chronicles.  If this is well-received, I’ll continue to do more of them.  As always, I value feedback on these, please let me know what you think!

You can find the first set of character biographies here or just check in the Star Portal Universe section.

Thanks for reading!

Writing Tools: Lore and History

Lore and History are part and parcel of world-building as a writer.  Knowing what happened (and why) allows a writer to project what will happen (and why).  History gives your characters roots… all the more so when the details are debatable.  Was one man a hero or a villian… well it depends on who you ask.

What are these things for a writer?  In many cases, History and Lore are never published.  They are notes or sometimes just ideas that the author has and are something that they base their world upon.  History is easy enough: this is the major events that have happened in this world.  I’ve personally used everything from a chronological timeline to a hundred-plus page document.  This is the stuff that you know has already gone before.  This is the cold hard facts.  Births, deaths, wars, all the framework for what has gone before.

Lore, on the other hand, is what the characters and readers know and feel.  This is the story about the valiant rebel who stood up to the bloody-handed tyrant or the murderous brigand who accosted the king’s lawmen.  Where history is what the author knows is the truth, lore gives the feeling of real-life.  Lore is made up of the urban myths, the rumors, the stories, and the legends.  As the author, you may know that the great hero who overthrew the King was actually an ambitious poser, who wanted to take the throne for himself… but your characters might still respect or venerate him because they don’t know that.

History is dry, dusty, and often boring… but Lore, that’s where you can get some interesting character conflicts.  Longstanding feuds, cases of mistaken identity, and tensions between clans or nations are all great fodder for writing some interesting character conflict.  Exploring how a character deals with such prejudices and overcomes them (or not) can make for interesting reading and fun writing.  Granted, this is secondary to making the characters themselves interesting, but it does give you excellent levers on character motivation.

So how do you go about designing history and lore?  Well, much of that comes back to what kind of story you want to tell.  If you want a story about betrayal, revenge, and star-crossed lovers, then a history of murders and assassinations, with a lore of each family blaming the other, makes for a great setting.   Your characters will have a history of violence to draw upon, where such solutions are expected by both sides.

That said, it is easy to go overboard in world-building a history.  You don’t necessarily need to know everything.  I know fellow authors who do seem to know everything.  They have page after page of notes.  They know why one group hates another group, why the first group likes the third group, who married who, who killed who… but they haven’t got beyond page ten of their actual manuscript.

The other area to go wrong is the (in)famous infodump.  This is where the plot stops and the reader is confronted by a wall of text about why this all matters.  Some readers love this, others… not so much.  The history and lore you’ve spent so much time on should be there in the background as a framework and as character motivation, but it shouldn’t step up front and stop the action of your story.  There’s a balance to strike between the reader having some idea of what is going on versus destroying dramatic tension and pacing by throwing hurdles of text at your reader.

Of course, the other end of the spectrum is where an author has no idea or at best a vague understanding of what has come before.  When the reader doesn’t know what has happened and the author doesn’t bother explain why this all matter in the greater scheme of things.  An author can pull this off if they have a strong, character-driven story… but it’s a lot easier to have that framework to build upon.  If the author doesn’t have a strong story or characters and they have a history/lore that is basically nonexistant… well, then you get a sort of generic story that is at best, not memorable and at worst… pretty much unreadable.

There is a tremendous advantage in being an author of fantasy or science fiction in the ability to craft the lore and history of your world to fit the story you want to tell.  A few hours and some jotted notes can give you a universe for your characters to explore and a framework for you to write a more vibrant and alive setting.

 

Kal’s January 2016 Forecast

January is here and with it, a whole new year!  It’s hard to believe that 2015 is gone, but here’s to bigger and better things this next year, right?  December seemed to take forever to finally leave, though much of that was due to moving, on my end.

As far as my writing. I’m digging into Renegades: Out of the Cold and hope to have it done soon.  I’m getting Fate of the Tyrant ready for my beta readers and I’m hoping to have it out to them by the end of the month.  My writing process has been slowed a bit what with moving and all, but I’m starting to get back into the swing of things.  Still, I’ve a long way to go to finish five novels for the year.

In other news, I’ve decided to try out Kindle Scout for my young adult novel, Valor’s Child.  I’ll have more news about that later this month, but ideally I’ll have it up in February on Kindle Scout.  For those of you unfamiliar with the program, authors can post their works there for review by anyone with an Amazon account.  If they like what they read, they can “up” vote it.  Books with lots of votes may be selected by Kindle for publishing in their program, where they “guarantee” a good turnout and offer an advance, as well as promoting the book.  I’ll write more about the process (probably at least a couple blog posts) later on once I’ve officially submitted my manuscript.

That’s all for now, thanks for reading!

 

Author’s Toolbag: Maps and Drawings

The number one job of an author is to tell a story.  In this sense, illustrations such as maps and drawings can be excellent tools for an author, particularly when they are used to immerse the reader more fully into the world.

I’m the type of reader who spends hours, sometimes days pouring over the maps, imagining myself in those worlds and feeling a bit of a thrill as I follow the characters along their journeys.  While I also enjoy the occasional drawing of a character, location, or item, seldom do these things resonate with me as well as a good map.

I’m also the type of author who is into world-building: creating a living, breathing world… and maps are a key part of that for me.  I’ve had the world layout for Eoriel mapped out for almost twenty years, tweaking details, changing names of cities and mountain ranges, altering coastlines slightly, but always with the same general layout.  The same can be said for the Shadow Space Chronicles, I’ve had the general layout of the universe in mind for years, and I’ve spent countless hours drawing out star systems, planet orbits, and the typical routes that ships travel.  I do this because I want to know what path the characters will take and why.  I want to know what language the locals will speak when the characters stop into a bar or tavern.

What does this have to do with the story?  A bit of nothing and a bit of everything.  It doesn’t matter in the slightest what language they speak in the bar… but the fact that they have a culture and language adds a level of richness, of reality to your writing.  So to, does having a map, of knowing that the characters can take the dangerous mountain pass in the dead of winter or divert two hundred miles to a  fortress held by enemies which is the only other way through.   Knowing that the characters will need three weeks (or three months) to travel to the next star system not only gives you a way to pace your story, but adds all kinds of fun plot developments and character arcs.  What do they do to pass that time?  How do they get along together on a tiny ship?  Which character(s) snap under the pressure?

Drawings, in the same way, not only help the reader to visualize the world, but it helps you as an author too.  Even a crude sketch can help you to develop what a character looks like in order to better describe them, or whether that city in the mountains is nestled in a valley or sprawls across a hilltop.  For a reader, a nice drawing can be an added bit, a way to fill in some of the details or even to add to the layer of mystery around something in your story.  As they say, a picture can be worth a thousand words.

How do I approach both of these?  Well, to be honest, with a map, I want there to be reasons for conflict.  Natural boundaries are frequently the dividing lines for nations… but sometimes those nations may disagree on which dividing line they are prepared to accept.  A nation that lives and thrives in the jungles may come into conflict with another nation which clearcuts the jungle to establish farmland.  Mountain tribes might raid lowlands where the growing season is longer and food is more plentiful… or lowlanders might send conquest parties to seize mineral rich valleys for mining.

Rivers, coastlines, bays, and lakes all serve as methods of transportation and as boundaries.  Mountains serve as boundaries and have profound effects upon rainfall and local climate.  Forests and jungle can act as barriers or havens, while swamps and marshes serve as foreboding locations and obstacles for characters or refuges for those who need to hide.  Deserts too, can serve as both obstacle and refuge, depending on the cultures of the people involved.

Drawings can hint at cultural themes, with stylistic emphasis in order to accentuate descriptions in your writing.   A well drawn illustration at the start of the book can set the mood or establish a theme for the reader, putting them in the right mindset.

Maps and drawings are both tools.  Learning to use them right is an excellent way to develop your novel and take it to the next level.

Author’s Toolbag: Creating Science Fiction and Fantasy Languages

One of the things that impressed me about reading Tolkien for the first time (and even more so, years later) is how he crafted entire unique languages for all of the nations and peoples in Middle Earth. The same has been done (with varying levels of success) by many authors. Some have created languages that are memorable, others crafted ones that add some flavor but not much more than that, and still others create a mess that serves as a hindrance to the reader.

When someone goes about crafting a language, Tolkien is often held up as the example. Of course, he was a linguist, so he had some advantages. He knew and understood languages on a level which most authors don’t really have time to do. Don’t forget, that he spent years developing his languages.

So, other than spending years working on developing a language, how can an author produce something that adds value to their work? There are a number of techniques that I’ve seen and used myself. The first one is to “borrow” from other languages. Tolkien borrowed heavily from Welsh, Finnish, and Gaelic. This of course requires finding or knowing languages that sound or look right for the culture you’re dealing with, as well as some vague familiarity with the language.

Another great technique is using a few words to add a bit of flavor to your text. A greeting here, a curse word there, can give the reader a feel of a distant land and new people. A great example of this is the Firefly series, where they used Chinese greetings, exclamations, and curses. Never enough that a listener was confused, just enough to add some spice.

Crafting languages with other alphabets or runic symbols is another method to add a bit of variety. Where this becomes an issue is formatting, especially with ebooks. If you fancy yourself an artist, you can spend hours, weeks, or even years crafting a unique alphabet (or borrowing from existing ones), which may then only appear in cover art or pictures within the novel.

Pitfalls of writing with your own fantasy and science fiction languages are things most well-read readers have encountered.

By and large, most readers tend to avoid big blocks of text they can’t read or understand. Now, if your intention is to confuse the reader, having long sentences in your own created language can work, but otherwise, I’d advise against it. Unless you think you’re as good as Tolkien (and even then) you probably won’t have people spending hours or days figuring out how to read your invented language.

The above mentioned runic language is another pitfall. Even if you consider yourself a professional artist, take the time to make sure what you are putting into a novel is what you really want there. Even in traditionally published novels I’ve seen crudely drawn bits of runes that I’ve mistaken for doodling in the margins.

By and large, the most important aspect is when you edit your novel. You may have spent years developing your languages, but if your story flows better without those, then you’ll need to cut it. By all means, throw some things in there to make it a bit more exciting or exotic, but not enough to eject the reader from your story.

National Write a Novel Month 2015

tumblr_mvlcokDhGQ1qc0c3bo1_500It’s National Write A Novel Month (here in the US, anyway).  What does that mean to me?  Well, I’m trying to write a novel anyway, but now I have a support group for the month to help keep me on track.  What does that mean to you?  Well, a lot of people are writing.   A really lot of people.  In fact, people I never even knew were interested in writing are trying to write novels.

And that’s a good thing.   Writing a novel is hard.  Trust me, I write
faster than almost anyone else I know, and it is probably one of the hardest things I’ve ever done, every time I do it.  It is a massive investment in brainpower, willpower, time, and your emotions.

Writing a novel can change you… and that kind of change is a good thing.  You learn a lot about yourself, like whether you really want to be an author or if you just like the idea.   Even if you don’t finish, you learn about yourself and if you do… well, writing a novel is also addictive.  You’re creating an entire world and (hopefully) getting other people to be caught up in that world.

Should the only reason you write a novel be that it is November and thus, NaNoWriMo?  Absolutely not.  If you buckle down and write, it should be for a host of reasons including the fact that you have a great story to tell.  But it is nice to have a support group.

Odin’s Eye Snippet Two

Here’s the second snippet for Odin’s Eye, coming this weekend!  Odin’s Eye is the sequel to Fenris Unchained and a novel in the Star Portal Universe.  You can find the first snippet here.

Time: 1200 Zulu, 24 June 291 G.D.

Location: Bliskin Station, Hanet System

 

“Yep,” Mike Majors nodded as he pointed out exterior damage to the ship’s forward ring, “That’ll need some repairs.”

It was a bit of an understatement, in Mel’s opinion. Having experienced the wrenching sensation of the off-balance warp drive, she would have said both damaged rings would have needed to be replaced. Their surfaces were covered in emitters designed to warp space… many of those emitters were damaged, out of alignment, or simply destroyed.

“I was hoping to get some upgrades,” Fenris said, his voice a gravelly baritone.

Majors didn’t even bat an eye at being addressed by the AI… which made Mel wonder just how many Guard laws that the Mercenary Guild bent or outright broke out here at Blisken Station where people paid extra to keep their secrets.

“That’s entirely possible,” Majors said. “Now, just off-hand I’d say it looks like you’re equipped with Tango-Seventeen drive field emitters, which were top of the line back a hundred years ago, but we can probably either upgrade or entirely replace them with something like X-Ray-Elevens.

“They’re the same series of emitters so we wouldn’t need to replace any power conduits or do any hull redesign. It would keep your drive field depth and give you even better speed at strategic warp, you’d be a match for most current military craft.”

“You have a good eye,” Fenris said. “Most humans don’t realize how deep a drive field I have.”

Mel rolled her eyes at that. She wasn’t certain whether the ship or the engineer was trying harder to flatter the other… either way, she knew it was going to cost the group money as the two worked each other over for more options.

“Oh, yeah,” Majors said. “I could tell that from just a glance. What I’m really interested in, is whether you’re satisfied with those disruptor cannon; they’re Mark Thirteens out of the Preserve, right?”

Like other engineers she had met, Majors wore a headset with an eyepiece that scrolled information to him. Mel could see ghostly text flit across it too fast for her to read anything.

“Yes,” Fenris growled. “Truthfully, I don’t think they provide the full output that they had on their specifications.”

“Yeah, that’s what I’d heard,” Majors said. “I also heard that they’re subject to projector failure when they’re fired in rapid sequence.”

“You know, I thought that was just a malfunction in my secondary systems, but that would explain the drop in rate of fire,” Fenris said.

Mel shook her head; this was about to get very expensive. She jotted down new main armament, even before Majors answered.

“Well, we’ve actually got some of their Mark Twenty-Fives in stock, pulled them off… well, I can’t really say what I pulled them off,” he winked conspiratorially at Mel, “but I’ve got a full set of those, which should be as easy as a one-for-one swap. There’s still a healthy market for the Mark Thirteens, so it wouldn’t cost much beyond installation and a bit of overhead. The Mark Twenty-Fives will give you a significant boost in firepower.”

It was a long moment before Fenris spoke, “I’ve looked at the specifications for the Twenty-Fives, I like that idea. What do you think about my power systems?”

“Well,” Major said after a glance at his eyepiece, “I’d say that they’re pretty solid. Power output is limited, but we could probably boost it with some…”

 

 

Time: 1400 Zulu, 25 June 291 G.D.

Location: Bliskin Station, Hanet System

 

“This looks like it’s going to be expensive,” Marcus said as he looked over Mel’s notes from the day before. “New drive emitters, new main armament, upgrades to the power systems, new secondary armament, and some defense upgrade options as well…”

Fenris’ growl answered him, “I’m worth it.”

“We know you are,” Mel said, “It’s just that we don’t know how much money we’ll have to do all this yet.”

She didn’t miss Marcus’s derisive snort; he thought letting Bob arrange things was tantamount to setting them all up to be murdered for their money or turned in to the Guard for a bounty.

“I offered to launder the money,” Fenris growled. “For that matter, I think I could probably simply hack…”

Mel held up her hands, “We talked about that, Fenris; the one place someone is guaranteed to notice hacking is when you start messing with money. Even just moving it around, someone is bound to notice. If you take it from accounts, even inactive accounts, they’ll notice sooner.” The last thing they wanted was anyone realizing there was a rogue AI on the loose.

“Fine,” Fenris said, “but I’d like repairs to begin soon.”

“They will,” Mel said. She didn’t mention how the ship had spent the past century making do with what it could manage on its own. The AI seemed to have exhausted much of his patience when he realized his freedom. At least he still values human life, she thought.

“I’d like to test my new systems out against an appropriate target after repairs are complete,” Fenris growled. “Maybe a pirate?”

Mostly values human life, she corrected herself. It seemed that like most men, Fenris wanted to play with his shiny new toys, even before he had them. “I’m certain we’ll figure something out.”

She looked around, “Bob left already?” The spy would have to physically travel to the Chrysalis system to make contact with the criminals he wanted to use to launder money.

That, in turn, meant that they had to use some of the cash to pay for his travel, as well as the travel of whoever went later after he set things up. Someone would have to carry the data codes for the money transfer and they would definitely want some backup and an escort of some kind. Probably Brian and Marcus, maybe me as well, she thought.

“He and Lace left this morning,” Marcus said. “I figure we’ll head out once it’s all set up. You bring the codes, Brian and I will back you up.” He didn’t bother to hide his suspicion of the agent. In his opinion Bob was just as untrustworthy as anyone else.

“We get a total value, yet?” Mel asked.

“Total account value is seventy-seven million, five hundred and thirty-four thousand, nine hundred and eighty-two Guard dollars,” Fenris said. “Though the exact value varies dependent upon exchange rates for the accounts in the Harmony Protectorate.”

Mel gave a low whistle, “That is a lot of money.”

She wasn’t certain about the going rate in the Harmony Protectorate. She knew they were a semi-autonomous collection of four systems that operated with a modified colonial charter under the UN Security Council… but still technically part of Guard Space. She hadn’t dealt much with them, since they had ruinous trade tariffs for foreign vessels.

Plus, she thought, there’s been a lot of ships disappearing out that way and even Vagyr’s pirates can’t account for all of them. It wouldn’t surprise her to hear that someone in the Protectorate was sheltering pirates.

Marcus grimaced, “I’m sure it won’t be nearly as much after we launder it. Standard cut for something like this is upwards of thirty percent.”

“Thirty percent?!” Mel demanded. “That’s extortionate!”

Marcus grinned, “It’s stolen money, so… yeah, it is extortionate. The kind of people we’re dealing with won’t do this from the goodness of their hearts and it costs them a pretty penny to do what they do. They’ll have to funnel the money through a dozen worlds, exchange it for bearer bonds or cash in transit and then funnel it back along the way. This much money, spread across a dozen worlds and systems, it’s going to take a lot of time and work. Plus they’ll probably have to bribe a few customs agents and several senior bank executives to hide those transactions.”

Mel just shook her head, “Still, thirty percent…” She hadn’t thought herself that attached to the money, but to see a third of it disappear so easily left her reeling.

“We’ll get cash to pay for some of the repairs, maybe enough left over to work some cover identities for us all, probably not enough to get a solid ID for you and I, though.”

Mel nodded at that. It seemed to be something of a fixation for Marcus, yet she couldn’t blame him. Without a new, solid identity, they were ghosts in the system. They weren’t free to move about any world, to step aboard any civilized space station, really, to accomplish anything. “We’ll have to register Fenris, too,” she said, “and pay for a Guild Charter if that’s what we’re going to do.”

“If we’re going to stay in civilized space I guess it’s our best option,” Marcus said. She didn’t miss the disapproval in his voice though. He didn’t like that option and he hadn’t yet explained why.

She looked down at her list and the preliminary estimates. Given how their funds were about to shrink, she didn’t know if they would have the money. Certainly they wouldn’t have the money for everything. So where could they afford to cut corners?

It wasn’t a question she could answer. For now, she just hoped Marcus was wrong about the going rate for money launderers.

 

Odin’s Eye, Snippet One

Here’s the first snippet of Odin’s Eye, sequel to Fenris Unchained:

CHAPTER ONE

Time: 1730 Zulu, 23 June 291 G.D.

Location: Outer System, Hanet System

 

Melanie Armstrong let out a startled yell as a plate-sized mechanical spider leapt at her face. Why, oh why, she wondered, did I ever trust this damned sneaky ship. She interrupted the spider’s leap with a downward blow and watched it balefully as it scurried away.

She spun at the polite applause behind her.

“Well done,” Marcus said. The former spy sat at the lone table of the small mess quarters. Other than a few more lines on his face and a few more scars, he looked much the same as the first time she had met him, shortly after the death of her parents. He had the same brown hair and the same cocky smile. His eyes, though, were different. It seemed that now that she knew the truth about him, his eyes showed all the guilt and pain that his face hid so well.

“Bravo,” Brian Liu said. The genetically modified man seemed mildly impressed, though she knew he probably could have fended off the repair bot while fighting an entire enemy tactical team bare-handed. Even with the other arm missing, she thought as her eyes caught on the stump of his right arm.

“I hate you both,” Mel said, but she didn’t put any force behind the words. She did, however, look to the ceiling and shake a fist at it, “That goes doubly for you, you damned robot!”

A deep, growling voice answered her, “I am not a robot, I am a fully autonomous warship guided by a quantum computer capable of self will and original thought.” Fenris being deliberately obtuse didn’t surprise her, though his decision to go along with Marcus’s and Brian’s plan to ambush her when she least expected it had.

“That’s what I said,” Mel growled, “You’re a damned robot.” She turned back to the cupboard and pulled out her breakfast ration bar. “I still fail to see why having his repair bots jump out at me all the time is supposed to prepare me better for a fight.”

She sat at the table and glared at Brian who shrugged, “Being ready at any time for anything is the best way to prepare yourself. Constant vigilance and paranoia are valuable survival traits… especially since you are undoubtedly marked for death.” He smiled tightly, “Paranoia is a valuable survival trait.”

“The Guard think we’re dead, the terrorists think we’re dead,” Mel savagely tore open her ration bar’s wrapper and bit into it. She spoke around the almost indigestible mass: “Everyone thinks we’re dead. Why be paranoid?”

The one good thing about having her adrenaline up and being mad was that she didn’t notice as much how disgusting the bar tasted. They were down to the last few of them at this point and those were mostly the ones that tasted so vile that no one had wanted to eat them until they had no other choice.

“Well,” Marcus said as he continued to chew on his ration bar, “that’s all well and good until we show up alive. The Guard have your biometrics in their systems, which will flash an alert when a match for you pops up.”

Mel shrugged at that. While they had discussed the problem before, they hadn’t yet found a solution other than the obvious, “We avoid worlds with Guard customs control. Head out to the Periphery.”

“While you or I could survive out there on our own,” Marcus said, “that’s not much of a life.”

“I’ve done it for centuries,” Brian Liu nodded. “It gets old, eking out a life, barely scraping by, always looking over your shoulder.” He swallowed the rest of his ration bar in a single motion, clearly the foul taste didn’t bother him as much as it did Mel. “Besides, the frontier is getting smaller every day. The Drakkus Empire is expanding, the Guard are pushing out into the Periphery, only a matter of time before you run out of places to hide.”

“Easy for you to say,” Mel grimaced, “you can change your biometrics.”

Brian was a genetically engineered super-soldier, designed back on fabled Earth. From what Mel had seen, he seemed to shrug off injuries that would incapacitate or kill a normal person, and he had claimed that, besides regrowing severed limbs, he could also alter his fingerprints, facial structure, and even iris, not much, but enough to fool most scanners. It wouldn’t give him a new identity, but it would cut ties to his old one.

“I didn’t say it wasn’t a painful process,” Brian admitted, “but it is an option for me.”

Brian, Marcus, and she were the only survivors from the shanghaied crew that Guard Intelligence had sent to stop the Fenris from destroying everything in the Vagyr system. Well, she thought, really we were sent to trigger the ship to attack Vagyr, but we didn’t know that at the time.

Bob, who worked for some unknown agency, had infiltrated the Guard Free Now cell sent to hijack the Fenris and so, in theory, Guard Intelligence wouldn’t be looking for him. Jerimiah Swaim was a programmer recruited by Guard Free Now; he was a young kid, fairly clueless, and Mel could admit that she mostly thought he was pathetic but harmless.

Stasia, the fourth survivor, had been revealed as Lace, a mercenary who specialized in infiltration. The woman had linked up with a shuttle only a few hours earlier and departed for Hanet, where she said she would arrange for their arrival.

Mel didn’t know if she could trust the mercenary. They’d offered her a sizable amount of money in exchange, but it was always possible that she might double-cross them for a reward anyway.

For that matter, the money they had offered to pay her with was looted from the terrorists who had tried to seize Fenris. An undercover Guard Intelligence officer had offered bank account numbers and access codes in exchange for his life. After he had died, they had quietly funneled the money out of those accounts and into new ones here in the Hanet system. Fenris had done all that through remote access, sending signals for money transfers from the outer limits of different systems on their way here.

Not all of those accounts were still active, a certain sign that either the terrorist organization known as Guard Free Now or the secretive organization of Guard Intelligence had locked them down. However, enough of them had been active, with enough money, to make them all very, very wealthy.

Which brought them to Hanet. The system was the central hub of the Mercenary Guild, which was the only place to hire mercenaries legally in the entirety of Guard Space. It was also one of the few non-Guard systems with the resources and shipyards to repair a vessel like Fenris. Assuming, of course, that the Mercenary Guild would allow such a thing to happen, seeing as it would violate a dozen of the Guard Security Council’s standing laws in the process.

It was something of a complicated problem, given the enemies that Mel and her companions had made. Most of human space, almost all of the worlds colonized from the Star Portal, was dominated by the United Nations Star Guard, most commonly called the Guard. While officially they merely oversaw interactions between worlds and prevented large-scale bloodshed, in reality they controlled just about everything of importance. They regulated interstellar travel and commerce, they restricted the size and composition of planetary defense forces, and they enforced laws on “threats” to humanity.

The last was the main problem for Fenris, mostly because of a general distrust, often with good reason, for non-human intelligences. The Culmor Empire, humanity’s long term enemies, had killed billions of humans, military and civilians alike. The Erandi, another alien race, had raided human worlds for generations, and it was common enough for humans to be killed as collateral damage in their ongoing civil war.

The violence and bloodshed from contact with those two races was the root of why contact with any non-human alien species was forbidden by the Guard. Human built Artificial Intelligences had a tendency to go mad, often with catastrophic results and as a result, they too, were banned. After a chain of murders tied to a mutant almost three hundred and fifty years earlier, the original United Nations Security Council had passed the Mutant and Telepath Act, which made genetic engineering of humans illegal, classified a range of “normal” humans, and made anyone outside that range subject to imprisonment and deportation to one of the penal colonies.

It fell on the various Guard military forces to enforce those laws and on Guard Intelligence to find violations as well as to provide information on external and external threats to humanity. While Guard Army forces often acted as peacekeepers and even policing forces, the Army was the least funded of the Guard Military Forces on an individual basis, which meant their training and policies adopted a shoot first and ask questions later strategy. They had to cover too many worlds, with too diverse populations, to worry about peaceable solutions for irregular situations.

While Guard Fleet officers tended to be better trained and educated, they were also often from the core systems, where prejudices were more entrenched… and where conformity was seen as more important than critical problem solving. The Guard Marines, the smallest of the Guard Military Forces, were the most likely to think outside of the box and perhaps even to try to find a solution with Fenris… yet their force was most often used in direct action or high intensity conflict situations. The most likely situation in which Mel and her companions would encounter anyone from the Guard Marine Corps was if they were there to kill them.

The fact that they most often had to enforce violations of the Security Council’s laws, and the fact that most of the laws carried extremely hard penalties, meant that the Guard and the criminals they caught often clashed violently. All too often a pirate or criminal would rather go down fighting rather than be caught alive. This had only reinforced many of the prejudices common among the ranks of Guard Military officers… especially the idea that all non-humans were dangerous.

Which meant that not only was Fenris illegal, the Guard would see him as a threat. Worse, Brian as a genemod, or genetically modified human, would also be seen as a threat. So the last thing that either of them could afford was for the Guard to become aware of their true natures. Given the fact that Mel, Marcus, and Brian had been recruited by Guard Intelligence as a cut-out for their planned destruction of a human-inhabited world, it didn’t make their survival very likely either should they be discovered.

This became a problem when most worlds and systems were considered ‘protected’ rather than ‘member’ planets. Member worlds had full local autonomy, while protected worlds had Guard-appointed local governors and garrisons. Member worlds were allowed larger planetary militia forces, internal elections, and even representation on the Security Council. Protected worlds had greater restrictions on their planetary militias and essentially no local autonomy.

All of which meant that Hanet’s Mercenary Guild was their best option. Only a few systems within Guard Space had any autonomy that extended past their atmosphere. Hanet, as part of their founding charter, had full system autonomy, so long as the Mercenary Guild followed its agreement and policed their own ranks.

Somewhat ironically, the better location to get such repairs done would have been the Vagyr system. While technically a protectorate system within Guard Space, it’s distance and isolation meant that it had far more autonomy than other such systems. Everyone well knew that the shipyards there regularly built and repaired pirate craft, laundered illegal money, and sold stolen and pirated goods.

They probably would have taken a hefty bribe and looked the other way… except of course they’d been notified that a robotic warship was on its way to annihilate the planet. Somehow, she thought, I doubt they’d overlook that minor detail when they started looking at repairs.

Outside of Guard Space lay their other option: the Periphery. A sparse band of worlds, most distant from the Parisian Sector and the Star Portal which had brought humanity to this region of the galaxy. The Periphery was frontier space, the limits of human expansion. Life on the Periphery was hard for many reasons, not least of which was the fact that the Guard defended their own systems first… and while it wasn’t uncommon for them to enforce laws on the Periphery, it was less common for them to come to the defense of the worlds out there. Her own homeworld, Century, lay in the Periphery… but so did Drakkus, another pirate haven, far worse than Vagyr.

“So,” Brian asked, “have we heard anything from Lace?” His voice was pleasant enough, but Mel could hear the note of tension that underlay it. While he trusted Mel, he didn’t trust the other woman. Neither, in fact, did Marcus. Nor, Mel knew, did Bob. In fact, Mel didn’t entirely trust the mercenary woman, but she seemed like the best option as far as her contacts being able to help them.

“Not yet,” Mel said as she tried to swallow her first bite of ration bar. She couldn’t force herself to swallow, though. As soon as they had any money they were going to buy food.

Mel looked up as the hatch opened, but it was only Swaim. The young hacker had hired on with the terrorists to help hijack the Fenris, but Mel couldn’t hold that against him. He was too young, too absolutely clueless, for her to blame him.

“Uh, hi guys,” Swaim said. “Anything good to eat?”

Marcus spoke around the first bite of his ration bar that he had yet to finish chewing, “Yeah, kid. They dropped off a buffet bar when they picked up Lace. Shrimp scampi, steaks, these great little french pastries, fresh salad, the works.”

Swaim’s eyes lit up, “Really?

“No,” Marcus said. “We’ve got red and orange ration bars, just like we did for dinner.”

Swaim sighed. “Oh, okay.” He pulled a ration bar out of the cupboard and then sat down next to Mel. “Hey, you’ve got a purple one, I’ll trade you!”

Mel frowned down at the ration bar. In her opinion, the purple ones were only slightly less horrible than the red and orange ones. Still, slightly less horrible beat postivily wretched any day. “I don’t know…”

“Oh, come on!” Swaim said. “I’ll give you two of the red ones for that one.”

“Um,” Mel said, “I think I’m good.”

Swaim sighed again. “You guys suck.”

Mel restrained herself from mentioning that she had saved his life multiple times. She bit off another bite and tried to ignore the flavor as she looked over at Marcus. “So, any thoughts on what we should do?”

He shrugged, “I’m still mostly in agreement with Lace. Membership in the Mercenary Guild, either as a Charter Company or working for someone else would be good pay.” He frowned, “I’m not sure how far our windfall money would go towards that… especially considering the bribes we’ll probably have to pay out to keep Fenris a secret.”

“We could always just go our separate ways,” Swaim said. “You know, I’ll take my share of the money and just…” he trailed off as he saw the other three stare at him. “What?”

“I didn’t know we were giving you a share,” Brian said with narrow eyes.

“Well, maybe not a full share, but I was helpful, right?” Swaim asked.

Marcus nodded, “That’s why we didn’t space you. You were working with Guard Free Now. They’re kind of terrorist scumbags, you know.”

“We aren’t spacing anyone,” Mel growled, though that was mostly because she didn’t want to set a precedent. Her little brother, after all, had fallen in with Guard Free Now. Sooner or later she would catch up to him and beat some sense into him, but she didn’t want Marcus or Brian venting him out an airlock before she had a chance. She looked at Swaim, “Nor are we cashing out. The only reason we are alive to spend that money is because of Fenris… who needs some serious repairs.”

Fenris’s growl spoke up a moment later, “Thanks, Mel.”

Who can also hear everything we say, Mel thought. She could see Swaim blanch as he realized he had implied cutting the AI out of the deal… the same AI who had proven he had free will and could kill. Not that he would kill them, Mel knew, but a little healthy fear on Swaim’s part wouldn’t hurt. She felt uncomfortable at how that thought mirrored her conversation with Brian and Marcus. It’s not the same, she thought, I’m not having metal spiders jump at him when he isn’t ready.

Swaim looked down at his ration bar. “I can’t manage to swallow,” he said around his single mouthful. He had a look of such intense concentration on his face that Mel suddenly wished she could have one of Fenris’ repair bots leap out at him, just to see his expression.

“Me neither,” Marcus said. “I keep hoping if I chew it up enough, I’ll be able to overwhelm my gag reflex, but it’s just too wretched.” His morose tone somehow made Mel feel a little bit better about her own bar.

Swaim looked down at his bar, “Maybe the red ones are rancid?”

Brian plucked the bar out of Swaim’s hands and wolfed it down in three bites. “Tastes alright to me.”

From what Mel had seen, Brian had an excellent metabolism, but it seemed both blessing and curse. He was able to keep going despite horrific wounds and total exhaustion. On the other hand, he consumed two or three times the food that the rest of them did and when Giran had cut the flow of oxygen to the bridge, Brian had passed out before the rest of them. Mel reminded herself to ask him if he had any other issues, but she figured it was even odds that he wouldn’t share any details or even give her false information.

Swaim looked down at his empty hand. He looked back at the cupboard. “I think I’m not hungry, anymore.” He left without another word.

Mel shook her head after he left, “God, he’s young.” The two men stared at her for a long moment before they both burst out laughing. “What?” Mel demanded.

Brian stood up, “Nothing, nothing at all. I’m going to check with Bob on the bridge, make certain he hasn’t sold us out and abandoned ship before the Guard Fleet arrives, that sort of thing.”

“Right…” Mel said with a roll of her eyes. She knew he was only half-joking. Brian didn’t trust anyone, as far as she could tell. Well, he seemed to trust her, but that was about it.

“Let me know how that goes,” Marcus said, nodding. She couldn’t tell if he was serious or if he was poking fun at the genemod. Knowing him, probably a little of both.

Mel restrained a sigh. She was surrounded by paranoid men. Sometimes she wondered why they hadn’t just killed one another. That would probably take all the fun out of it for them, she thought.

That left just her and Marcus and the silence grew long and uncomfortable. In the heat of the moment, just after they had pulled it all off and survived, Mel had felt like they were close again. She had felt all her old feelings for him rush back…

And then she had felt a wave of guilt. This was the man who had killed her parents. Before she’d even met him, he had been a ruthless agent for Guard Intelligence, a man so feared that even his own agency thought him a loose cannon. How could she feel anything for him when he had so much blood on his hands?

She could see that he felt guilt as well. She could see the ghosts that haunted his eyes. He didn’t want forgiveness, she knew, he wanted punishment. He wanted to die or, failing that, to escape his feelings in a haze of drugs or booze or whatever it took to make him feel empty again.

“So…” Marcus said. “Do you think things will go alright with the money transfers?”

Mel sighed. He had already made it clear that he thought anyone would betray them over this amount of money. For that matter, she didn’t entirely disagree with him. Yet for now, at least, no-one aboard the crew had anyone else to turn to… well, no-one besides Lace and Bob.

Brian has suggested he has a network of some kind that he’s tied into, she reminded herself. “I don’t think we have any choice but to go on trust, for now.”

“Look, Mel,” Marcus said, “the reason I bring this up is because of everyone here besides you and Swaim… the rest of us could take that money and vanish. Hell, Swaim could probably manage to transfer that money and vanish; he only needs to hide from Guard Free Now, after all.”

Mel shook her head, “You wouldn’t do that to me, you wouldn’t walk away.”

Marcus shook his head, almost as if he wanted to say something, but he didn’t interrupt her.

“Bob has made it clear that whatever he was investigating, he seems to think we’re as good a place as any to stay, plus I figure his organization, whatever it is, seems to keep tabs on him. Brian seems to like us…”

Marcus snorted at that, “He thinks of you as a pet. The rest of us he could kill without batting an eyelash.”

“… and that leaves Lace, who could have betrayed us at any time. We didn’t know she wasn’t a harmless hacker…”

“We suspected her, after your brother tipped you off about the possibility,” Marcus shook his head. “Brian and I were both watching her. We’d have gunned her down if she tried.”

“…which is why we trusted her enough to send her to talk to her people,” Mel finished despite his interruptions. She felt a little proud of that.

“Okay,” Marcus waved a hand, “So, lets say everyone here plays fair. What, then? I can tell you aren’t all that keen on mercenary work. Doesn’t your homeworld have a mercenary company? We could sign on with them.”

Mel nodded. Century was out on the Periphery, technically that meant they weren’t under Guard Charter, so they didn’t need to follow it, but in practice, operating above board prevented any kind of excuse for a Sector Commander to send a task force out to seize the system.

She didn’t know the exact details, but she knew that Century’s Planetary Militia had some reserve elements that operated under the Mercenary Guild, which let them take contracts out of Hanet. It wasn’t uncommon for planetary militias to do that to give some of their people real combat experience. Century was a bit unique at the size of their component, but they also had a sizable planetary militia… and the Periphery was a rough place for those without strong defenses.

Her grandmother, Admiral Armstrong, had some role in that, she knew, but she didn’t want to dive down that rabbit hole just now, especially not when her brother had made it sound like her grandmother might be involved in Guard Free Now. She didn’t want to believe that, but she wanted to do some investigating before she contacted the woman.

“They do, but I doubt they want to sign on an illegal automated warship,” Mel said truthfully. “Especially not one crewed by convicted criminals.”

Marcus snorted at that. “I don’t know, might be a useful thing on a resume… but yeah, with how grabby Guard Fleet has been, it’s probably best that they don’t give them a pretense to show up and seize the planet.”

Ten Sisters would be on everyone’s mind, Mel knew. Guard Fleet had seized the independent system and then a cluster of stars nearby, systems which had been on the Periphery for centuries.

“So an independent Company Charter or working for one of the darker companies,” Marcus said. The so-called ‘black’ Companies were rarely spoken about. They were the ones hired for the most secretive missions and they paid an extra fee to the Guild to keep their assets off the public database. Guard Fleet looked other way on that, mostly because that allowed them to employ those companies and also to keep them operating under the Guild… who strictly forbid any actions against the Guard under their founding charter.

There were also freelance mercenaries, privateers, and pirates, but the Mercenary Guild policed their own ranks and dealt very harshly with freelancers in general, which kept the Guard happy also. By and large, Hanet was seen as a necessary evil by Guard Fleet… which was why getting under the umbrella of their protection would be good for all of them.

Even if someone in Guard Military or Guard Intelligence suspected them of breaking some laws, they would overlook it because they wouldn’t want to risk their relationship with the Mercenary Guild. Outright proof would be something else entirely, but hopefully that could be prevented.

“What about clean identities?” Mel asked. That was her big worry. They had discussed it before. With her marked as dead, it would be impossible for her to open a personal bank account, get any kind of electronic identity, or conduct any business. Since proving she was alive would put Guard Intelligence and Guard Free Now on her tail, that wasn’t an option either.

That left either scrubbing her data out of the system or changing identities… which still wouldn’t solve the problems with her biometrics. The problem was that the system databases were all independent and they policed corrupted data.

Given time, Fenris could hack almost any star system’s data network and erase her files out… but the next time a courier ship came in with an update it would put her file right back into the system. It would have low priority, since she was officially dead, but if it happened enough, automated procedures would flag it in the system.

The same went for all of her companions. The problem was the decentralized network. Either they would have to hit every system simultaneously, or somehow work it into a major data update. Otherwise, they might as well not bother.

“Bob is clean,” Marcus said. “Swaim is as well, though he’s got to worry about Guard Free Now identifying him. They’ll start to get curious if he reappears from the dead… and then start to wonder about the rest of us and this ship.”

Mel nodded. She felt more than a little temptation to leak information out that way, in order to draw her brother out. Yet she knew that it was more likely that Colonel Frost or one of his comrades would show up. She shivered a bit as she thought of the Guard Free Now officer, a man who had sacrificed the lives of his men and who had planned to have her executed.

My brother was just going to watch, she thought, he didn’t believe it would come to that… but I wonder if it would have changed his mind if it had.

“The Mercenary Guild might have some people with access to put us in the system,” Marcus shrugged. “For that matter, even if they don’t, they might want to keep us off the books. I’m certain there are missions they take where they’d like to have some deniability.”

“Those are hardly the type of mission I’d like to take,” Mel said. A mission like that would be high risk, with a good chance of being captured or killed.” She really didn’t mind some risks, but suicide missions were not big on her list of things to do. “Even if they aren’t illegal, immoral, or otherwise compromising.”

“I’m not big on that either,” Fenris growled. The gravely voice of the warship was another reminder of someone who needed an identity.

“A ship,” Mel said, “is harder to hide. The Wolf-class battlecruisers were pretty unique. I doubt they’re in most ships’ emission profiles, but a ship with a unique appearance is something that would stand out.”

Marcus nodded, “I know.” He looked up at the ceiling, “For all I know, they might have a new hull for you, if that would even be possible. Feel like an upgrade?”

“I like my body,” Fenris said. “It isn’t perfect, but it is mine.

His words echoed an earlier conversation Mel had had with Lace. The woman had casually commented that Mel could have a full reconstructive surgery. It would change her face, body structure, even alter her iris and retina imprints and fingerprints. For that matter, Lace had access to illegal body implants that let her take on the features and biometrics of a target. If that was her only option, Mel could consider it… but she would rather keep her face. I look like my mother and grandmother… she thought, it feels wrong to cut that last connection to my past when I’ve lost everything else.

Marcus shrugged. “Have it your way, but it’s an idea to consider. I’m certain we’ll have to make some changes… I just think we should think about this a bit before hand… as long as Lace hasn’t walked off with our bank accounts, anyway.”

Mel growled, “I told you…”

Marcus held up a hand, “Answer me this: are you saying that she couldn’t have taken our bank account information or that you think she wouldn’t?”

Mel opened her mouth to snap out a sharp denial… and then closed it suddenly. The woman had maintained a perfect cover as a hacker for months, under close observation from the crew as well as through a Guard Intelligence interrogation and imprisonment. Lace was extremely intelligent and devious and there was no doubt in her mind that if she had wanted to empty the bank accounts and abscond with the money, she could have.

“That’s what I thought,” Marcus said. “That’s why Brian and I have Fenris attacking you with his repair robots. Just because we’re paranoid it doesn’t mean someone isn’t out to get us. We have made enemies, Mel, and even if they’re dead, it doesn’t mean you can trust the people you meet. You have to be ready for anything.”

“I am ready for anything,” Mel snapped.

“Good,” Marcus said.

Just then another of the spider bots dropped on her from the ceiling. Mel gave a shout and her chair toppled backwards.

She hit the floor hard and her head struck the metal deck with enough force that she saw stars. “God!  I hate you both so much.”

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Odin’s Eye, Coming Soon!

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Odin’s Eye will pit Mel and her friends against foes more powerful and dangerous than any they have faced before, some of whom push the very boundaries of what it is to be human.

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