New Site Content: Character Biographies

As part of the new site content, I’m introducing character biographies to the website.  I’ll have background details and general descriptions of central (and some side) characters for each of the series I write in.  Up first (because it’s the smallest cast of characters) is the the Star Portal Universe and the cast of Fenris Unchained.

I tried to strike a balance of giving enough background to develop the character without including any real spoilers.  As one might imagine, on Fenris Unchained, this was more difficult than I’d like, but I think I did alright.

Ideally I’ll add pictures of the characters at some point, but for now, I’m taking the time to go through and do the same to all my other universes.  The good news is most of this is already done in the form of notes I keep for myself, I’ve just got to scrub those and make sure I don’t give away any spoilers.

Up next I’m working on characters from the Eoriel Saga and then from the Shadow Space Chronicles.  If this is well-received, I’ll continue to do more of them.  As always, I value feedback on these, please let me know what you think!

You can find the first set of character biographies here or just check in the Star Portal Universe section.

Thanks for reading!

Writing Tools: Lore and History

Lore and History are part and parcel of world-building as a writer.  Knowing what happened (and why) allows a writer to project what will happen (and why).  History gives your characters roots… all the more so when the details are debatable.  Was one man a hero or a villian… well it depends on who you ask.

What are these things for a writer?  In many cases, History and Lore are never published.  They are notes or sometimes just ideas that the author has and are something that they base their world upon.  History is easy enough: this is the major events that have happened in this world.  I’ve personally used everything from a chronological timeline to a hundred-plus page document.  This is the stuff that you know has already gone before.  This is the cold hard facts.  Births, deaths, wars, all the framework for what has gone before.

Lore, on the other hand, is what the characters and readers know and feel.  This is the story about the valiant rebel who stood up to the bloody-handed tyrant or the murderous brigand who accosted the king’s lawmen.  Where history is what the author knows is the truth, lore gives the feeling of real-life.  Lore is made up of the urban myths, the rumors, the stories, and the legends.  As the author, you may know that the great hero who overthrew the King was actually an ambitious poser, who wanted to take the throne for himself… but your characters might still respect or venerate him because they don’t know that.

History is dry, dusty, and often boring… but Lore, that’s where you can get some interesting character conflicts.  Longstanding feuds, cases of mistaken identity, and tensions between clans or nations are all great fodder for writing some interesting character conflict.  Exploring how a character deals with such prejudices and overcomes them (or not) can make for interesting reading and fun writing.  Granted, this is secondary to making the characters themselves interesting, but it does give you excellent levers on character motivation.

So how do you go about designing history and lore?  Well, much of that comes back to what kind of story you want to tell.  If you want a story about betrayal, revenge, and star-crossed lovers, then a history of murders and assassinations, with a lore of each family blaming the other, makes for a great setting.   Your characters will have a history of violence to draw upon, where such solutions are expected by both sides.

That said, it is easy to go overboard in world-building a history.  You don’t necessarily need to know everything.  I know fellow authors who do seem to know everything.  They have page after page of notes.  They know why one group hates another group, why the first group likes the third group, who married who, who killed who… but they haven’t got beyond page ten of their actual manuscript.

The other area to go wrong is the (in)famous infodump.  This is where the plot stops and the reader is confronted by a wall of text about why this all matters.  Some readers love this, others… not so much.  The history and lore you’ve spent so much time on should be there in the background as a framework and as character motivation, but it shouldn’t step up front and stop the action of your story.  There’s a balance to strike between the reader having some idea of what is going on versus destroying dramatic tension and pacing by throwing hurdles of text at your reader.

Of course, the other end of the spectrum is where an author has no idea or at best a vague understanding of what has come before.  When the reader doesn’t know what has happened and the author doesn’t bother explain why this all matter in the greater scheme of things.  An author can pull this off if they have a strong, character-driven story… but it’s a lot easier to have that framework to build upon.  If the author doesn’t have a strong story or characters and they have a history/lore that is basically nonexistant… well, then you get a sort of generic story that is at best, not memorable and at worst… pretty much unreadable.

There is a tremendous advantage in being an author of fantasy or science fiction in the ability to craft the lore and history of your world to fit the story you want to tell.  A few hours and some jotted notes can give you a universe for your characters to explore and a framework for you to write a more vibrant and alive setting.

 

Kal’s January 2016 Forecast

January is here and with it, a whole new year!  It’s hard to believe that 2015 is gone, but here’s to bigger and better things this next year, right?  December seemed to take forever to finally leave, though much of that was due to moving, on my end.

As far as my writing. I’m digging into Renegades: Out of the Cold and hope to have it done soon.  I’m getting Fate of the Tyrant ready for my beta readers and I’m hoping to have it out to them by the end of the month.  My writing process has been slowed a bit what with moving and all, but I’m starting to get back into the swing of things.  Still, I’ve a long way to go to finish five novels for the year.

In other news, I’ve decided to try out Kindle Scout for my young adult novel, Valor’s Child.  I’ll have more news about that later this month, but ideally I’ll have it up in February on Kindle Scout.  For those of you unfamiliar with the program, authors can post their works there for review by anyone with an Amazon account.  If they like what they read, they can “up” vote it.  Books with lots of votes may be selected by Kindle for publishing in their program, where they “guarantee” a good turnout and offer an advance, as well as promoting the book.  I’ll write more about the process (probably at least a couple blog posts) later on once I’ve officially submitted my manuscript.

That’s all for now, thanks for reading!

 

Book Review: The Hand of Mars by Glynn Stewart

Glynn Stewart's Hand of Mars
Glynn Stewart’s Hand of Mars

Glynn Stewart’s Hand of Mars picks up a few years after his previous book (Starship’s Mage) left off.  The story remains focused upon Damien, who has grown in skills and abilities, but seems to be the same person we saw at the end of the last book.

The story revolves around a planet where a corrupt governor has ironclad control over a planet and has even subverted the Emperor’s appointed military officers.  Damien, sent to help one of the Emperor’s Hands of Mars, must investigate, find out the truth, and set things right.  What seems like a simple proposition goes rapidly sideways with drastic political and military repercussions.

Damien remains an interesting character, with a strong personal sense of responsibility and an overall sense of integrity.  His earnestness, his desire to do what is right, is put to the test… yet at the same time, he never truly has to make a difficult decision.  The bad guys in this novel are really, really bad, willing to wipe out tens of thousands or even millions of people, just to get their way.  When he confronts them, we have that sense of satisfaction as he brings them to justice… but there’s never any doubt over whether he’ll make the right choice.

I did enjoy watching Damien grow.  There was no doubt about where he was headed, growing in both experience and authority, and it was nice to see the character rise in that fashion.  Glynn Stewart handled it well, giving Damien time to shoulder more and more responsibility and letting the reader see the character develop.

The side characters in this novel don’t feel quite as engaging as in Starship’s Mage.  There it was easier, I think, due to the smaller cast, a single ship with a small(ish) crew.  I didn’t feel as much personal attachment to the characters in the sequel, which removed a lot of the dramatic tension regarding their survival.  They were interesting, from Hand Stealey to her Marine escort and many of the other characters… but they felt more like a backdrop.  This was Damien’s story, and they were here to support that.

Which is not to say that I didn’t enjoy the book.  It remained a fascinating read and as always, the magic system and the universe are engaging.  I read the book quickly and felt satisfied at the end.  It’s a quick, engaging read with good guys confronting the bad.  I’m definitely looking forward to the next book and I enjoyed watching Damien’s character grow.

ROGUE MAGE TURNED INTERPLANETARY ENVOY

Three years ago, as Ship’s Mage of the starship Blue Jay, Damien Montgomery was pursued to the edge of human space by both the agents and enemies of the Mage-King of Mars — before being brought in from the cold.

Now, trained in new skills by the Mage-King himself, Damien has been sent to the planet Ardennes alongside Alaura Stealey, Hand of the King. A rebel movement there has destroyed cities fighting a Governor seemingly lost to corruption.

But not all on Ardennes is as it seems. As allies becomes enemies and an entire world comes apart in chaos around him, Damien will find both his skills and integrity tested to the utter limit.

You can get it from Amazon.

Happy New Year 2016!

Happy New Year! 2016 is here. I’m ready to face the new year by reviewing what all has happened over the last year. I’ve come out with five novels in 2015 and I hope to match that again in 2016. In my personal life, I’ve left Active Duty in the US Army and transitioned to life as a Reservist, started a new civilian job, and managed a move to Denver.

I couldn’t have managed any of that without the support and love of my wife, who has shared with me in all the ups and downs throughout the year. Thanks, also, to all my readers who have made my success as a writer possible. Thanks for the great feedback, for enjoying my writing, and for posting reviews (those of you who do that, I’m especially grateful).

I’m excited to see what 2016 has in store for all of us.